Plot: 8/10 Grammar: 8/10 Combination and understanding: 8/10 Total percentage: 80%
2021-09-16
1
Ayaan (MTDC: Advisor)
more was expected from the middle part. the story was nicely opened. the closing was nice, but it was confusing to me-- um the middle writer could have named the characters and made a plot (as it was his/her job as a middle writer) but it was missing
grammar: 9 plot: 7 way of writing: 8 (average mark is given cause there was nothing special in way of writing, for a story like this many metaphors can be used) understand amongst writers: 7
oh also I forgot to type, I thought that the small sister would kill the ml while reading the last para, it was unexpected
2021-08-05
0
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ID: 0411
Grammar: 8.5 Punctuation: 8 Plot: 8 Way of writing: 8 Understanding between the paras: 8
In total, 81%
The story was good.. Tbh.. I was scratching my head over the sisters 😂 I literally exchanged their characters while reading 🌚🌚
Comments
🇵🇸 Valt Aoi MTNp
Middle part was confusing...
ID: 0411
Plot: 8/10
Grammar: 8/10
Combination and understanding: 8/10
Total percentage: 80%
2021-09-16
1
Ayaan (MTDC: Advisor)
more was expected from the middle part.
the story was nicely opened.
the closing was nice, but it was confusing to me--
um the middle writer could have named the characters and made a plot (as it was his/her job as a middle writer) but it was missing
grammar: 9
plot: 7
way of writing: 8 (average mark is given cause there was nothing special in way of writing, for a story like this many metaphors can be used)
understand amongst writers: 7
oh also I forgot to type, I thought that the small sister would kill the ml while reading the last para, it was unexpected
2021-08-05
0
♛ℓιzαηηє࿐
ID: 0411
Grammar: 8.5
Punctuation: 8
Plot: 8
Way of writing: 8
Understanding between the paras: 8
In total, 81%
The story was good..
Tbh.. I was scratching my head over the sisters 😂
I literally exchanged their characters while reading 🌚🌚
2021-08-02
1