Liked this story but it would be better if writer cleared the reason why she was chased away and what happened between her and the psychopath ( I mean the misunderstanding )... overall the story was excellent. I liked the way it was described but I preferred the last part...
Plot: 7 Grammar: 8 Understanding and combination: 8 Percentage: 77
2021-09-15
1
Ayaan (MTDC: Advisor)
the middle paragraph could have been better. after reading the first part, something more/different was being expected in the second part. the second participant seemed to have overused the idea of 'fairy' (um yeah just my thoughts). the third writer winded up the story in a nice way, impressive. the change in POV from one to another was confusing but not so disappointing, in fact it looked little creative.
grammar: 8/10 plot: 7/10 way of writing: 8.5/10 understanding btwn writers : 7.5 /10 total score: 77.5%
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вℓσѕѕσм 🍁🍂
Story is good....but the starting of the middle paragraph can be done in other way... overall the whole story is good
plot:8
grammar: 8
understanding: 8.5
percentage: 78%
2021-09-17
1
🇵🇸 Valt Aoi MTNp
Liked this story but it would be better if writer cleared the reason why she was chased away and what happened between her and the psychopath ( I mean the misunderstanding )... overall the story was excellent. I liked the way it was described but I preferred the last part...
Plot: 7
Grammar: 8
Understanding and combination: 8
Percentage: 77
2021-09-15
1
Ayaan (MTDC: Advisor)
the middle paragraph could have been better. after reading the first part, something more/different was being expected in the second part. the second participant seemed to have overused the idea of 'fairy' (um yeah just my thoughts).
the third writer winded up the story in a nice way, impressive.
the change in POV from one to another was confusing but not so disappointing, in fact it looked little creative.
grammar: 8/10
plot: 7/10
way of writing: 8.5/10
understanding btwn writers : 7.5 /10
total score: 77.5%
2021-07-29
0