ID: 0407 Hilarious... I almost got a heart attack thinking it was a mafia type story or something!
Plot: 10/10 Grammar: 8/10 Combination and understanding: 9/10 percentage: 90
2021-09-16
2
Ayaan (MTDC: Advisor)
The story was short and sweet. simply loved it. the middle para was great! how the closing paras writer tried changing the whole thing to make a twist, that idea was tried being carried out in a smooth way, nice. cause the ending left me disappointed, it shows that the story really got me. wonderful job
grammar: 9.75 (9.75, 9.75, 9.75) - (to what my knowledge knows, there is no way we get full marks in our English language exams 🤔 dk that's what my teacher told when we were in 7th) plot: 9.583 (9.75, 10, 9) way of writing: 9 (9,9,9) - (wanted to give 10 actually but still something was missing) understanding btwn writers: 9 (9,9,9) - (close to 10, it was good) total score: 93.3325%
2021-07-29
1
♛ℓιzαηηє࿐
From my side ID: 0407
Grammar: 8 Punctuation: 8 Plot: 9 Way of writing: 8 Understanding between the paras: 9
As I said earlier, good and unique plot is attractive but the most important thing is the understanding and way of writing. The way of writing was good but punctuation errors covered it up. And abt the understanding, it was well but try to avoid the confusions and explain the situation and scene more.. that's all
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🇵🇸 Valt Aoi MTNp
ID: 0407
Hilarious... I almost got a heart attack thinking it was a mafia type story or something!
Plot: 10/10
Grammar: 8/10
Combination and understanding: 9/10
percentage: 90
2021-09-16
2
Ayaan (MTDC: Advisor)
The story was short and sweet. simply loved it. the middle para was great! how the closing paras writer tried changing the whole thing to make a twist, that idea was tried being carried out in a smooth way, nice.
cause the ending left me disappointed, it shows that the story really got me.
wonderful job
grammar: 9.75 (9.75, 9.75, 9.75) - (to what my knowledge knows, there is no way we get full marks in our English language exams 🤔 dk that's what my teacher told when we were in 7th)
plot: 9.583 (9.75, 10, 9)
way of writing: 9 (9,9,9) - (wanted to give 10 actually but still something was missing)
understanding btwn writers: 9 (9,9,9) - (close to 10, it was good)
total score: 93.3325%
2021-07-29
1
♛ℓιzαηηє࿐
From my side
ID: 0407
Grammar: 8
Punctuation: 8
Plot: 9
Way of writing: 8
Understanding between the paras: 9
As I said earlier, good and unique plot is attractive but the most important thing is the understanding and way of writing. The way of writing was good but punctuation errors covered it up. And abt the understanding, it was well but try to avoid the confusions and explain the situation and scene more.. that's all
2021-07-28
2