Plot: 9/10 Grammar: 8/10 Combination and understanding: 9/10 percentage: 87/100
2021-09-15
1
Ayaan (MTDC: Advisor)
um the closing part was nice, have to say, but it didn't look like a closing. it looked like the middle paragraph. the starting was impressive. the middle part was good, but could have been made better. the twists were impressive too, I liked them, however it could still have been made more realistic. the story was written from third person pov, not from first person. so if Alex's side story was also included along with Ishani, it would look nice. but it was a pleasant story in All
(I'll change my way of evaluation: in the brackets, comma separates the points for each of the the paras)
grammar: 8.66 (9, 8, 9) plot: 8.33 (9, 7.5, 8.5) way of writing: 8.833 (10, 7.5, 9) understanding: 9.5 (9.5,9.5,9.5) total score: 88.3075%
Comments
вℓσѕѕσм 🍁🍂
Woah... it's an amazing story...such a beautiful ending...I really like the ending...all the three authors are great.... overall it's an amazing story
plot: 9
grammar: 8.5
understanding: 9
percentage: 87.8%
2021-09-17
1
🇵🇸 Valt Aoi MTNp
Ending was painful but good
Plot: 9/10
Grammar: 8/10
Combination and understanding: 9/10
percentage: 87/100
2021-09-15
1
Ayaan (MTDC: Advisor)
um the closing part was nice, have to say, but it didn't look like a closing. it looked like the middle paragraph. the starting was impressive. the middle part was good, but could have been made better.
the twists were impressive too, I liked them, however it could still have been made more realistic.
the story was written from third person pov, not from first person. so if Alex's side story was also included along with Ishani, it would look nice. but it was a pleasant story in All
(I'll change my way of evaluation: in the brackets, comma separates the points for each of the the paras)
grammar: 8.66 (9, 8, 9)
plot: 8.33 (9, 7.5, 8.5)
way of writing: 8.833 (10, 7.5, 9)
understanding: 9.5 (9.5,9.5,9.5)
total score: 88.3075%
ps- the calculations wrecked my brain and time :)
2021-07-29
1