The story is kinda confusing...but I like the ending...but somewhere I'm confused till now...I read it 2 times...a little grammatical mistakes were there... overall good... things can be improved
plot:- 8 grammar:- 7 understanding:- 7 and percentage: 75.8%
2021-09-16
1
🇵🇸 Valt Aoi MTNp
ID: 0402
Starting and middle part was okay but the last part was confusing...
Plot: 7/10 Grammar: 8/10 Combination and understanding: 7/10 total percentage: 73/100
2021-09-15
1
Ayaan (MTDC: Advisor)
honestly, this story got me very confused. I had to read it over again to understand, but forgive my poor brain I still didn't understand what the author meant. actually, the way each writer continued on, got me to laugh a little even I thought that Ru was a male name, how the last writer used this (may be confusion with the character gender) as an idea/plot was impressive. but the mentioned "you" was difficult to understand to whom it mentioned, I seriously didn't get it. the beginning of story was like the same typical start except it wasn't catchy or there was nothing unexpected in the same typical day, which is probably supposed to be the ordinary plot start; or even if there is nothing unexpected happiness on a similar fine day, at least the way the day is expressed should be metaphoric or exaggerated. the middle part was a nice idea and way of writing only except the starting writer's idea was not quite carried on further and only the middle writer's idea was portrayed. nothing about the special brother was mentioned further on
grammar: 8/10 plot: 8/10 understanding between authors: 7/10 way of writing: 8/10
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The story is kinda confusing...but I like the ending...but somewhere I'm confused till now...I read it 2 times...a little grammatical mistakes were there... overall good... things can be improved
plot:- 8
grammar:- 7
understanding:- 7
and percentage: 75.8%
2021-09-16
1
🇵🇸 Valt Aoi MTNp
ID: 0402
Starting and middle part was okay but the last part was confusing...
Plot: 7/10
Grammar: 8/10
Combination and understanding: 7/10
total percentage: 73/100
2021-09-15
1
Ayaan (MTDC: Advisor)
honestly, this story got me very confused. I had to read it over again to understand, but forgive my poor brain I still didn't understand what the author meant.
actually, the way each writer continued on, got me to laugh a little
even I thought that Ru was a male name, how the last writer used this (may be confusion with the character gender) as an idea/plot was impressive. but the mentioned "you" was difficult to understand to whom it mentioned, I seriously didn't get it.
the beginning of story was like the same typical start except it wasn't catchy or there was nothing unexpected in the same typical day, which is probably supposed to be the ordinary plot start; or even if there is nothing unexpected happiness on a similar fine day, at least the way the day is expressed should be metaphoric or exaggerated.
the middle part was a nice idea and way of writing only except the starting writer's idea was not quite carried on further and only the middle writer's idea was portrayed. nothing about the special brother was mentioned further on
grammar: 8/10
plot: 8/10
understanding between authors: 7/10
way of writing: 8/10
so the total percentage counts up to 77.5%
2021-07-25
0