Overall novel with two parts, I'll give it 4.5 stars. Mainly because I like how the story tell how strong the FL is. I like Berli, I think her role is significantly affected the overall novel, in p1 & p2. For me Alex character doesn't fit the storyline. He was pictured to be a brilliant businessman yet a broken soul, also went to therapist to cure his mental illnesses. He was all of that but he shouldn't be dumb. yet he looks dumb. I don't like the FL in the 2nd story. She had a toxicity vibe around her. I pity Jessica so much. She deserves something much more significant than having herself to be a gift to Brian. 1st story recycled for the 2nd story but the story didn't fit because Jo & Jess relationship is diff.
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Overall novel with two parts, I'll give it 4.5 stars. Mainly because I like how the story tell how strong the FL is. I like Berli, I think her role is significantly affected the overall novel, in p1 & p2. For me Alex character doesn't fit the storyline. He was pictured to be a brilliant businessman yet a broken soul, also went to therapist to cure his mental illnesses. He was all of that but he shouldn't be dumb. yet he looks dumb. I don't like the FL in the 2nd story. She had a toxicity vibe around her. I pity Jessica so much. She deserves something much more significant than having herself to be a gift to Brian. 1st story recycled for the 2nd story but the story didn't fit because Jo & Jess relationship is diff.
2022-02-07
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Maria Goretti Kuswinarti
rania pa kbr thor 😂
2021-05-19
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Niknik
#babysitter bukan babysister ya kak author
😊
2021-05-18
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