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Chapter 22: Blueprints of Shadows
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Lin Lan
Just a little feedback! Take it lightly I think everything is moving too slow and things are repeating often just with different scenarios, it's time something big happens! And concentrate more on the main person this story is about. It's cool to see other characters but now there are too many and I'm getting lost, + most of them seem to have the same goals and everything, they should be a little different so they feel like people. It would also have been pretty cool if her friends had found out she (we) was bringing the phone with her, then a little fight or something. Exciting. Can't wait to see what you write next!!
2025-09-26
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Lin Lan
Something is missing, I just don't know what exactly
2025-09-26
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Lin Lan
feels like her personality is the most structured, I think k I like her a bit more.
2025-09-26
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