This chapter was seriously so interesting /Smile/ it got thrilling, it keeps getting better and better, I think the only missing thing now is that the stalker is a little dull, he's just saying a few things every now and then, I'd love to see the initiative and it would really make my heat skip a beat If he snapped and sounded more not "dull" I don't mind UT since that's probably what you're going for, and I know it will be really good but if he started talking differently it would be a surprise and a scare. The others characters aren't the same but sometimes they sound like him, be careful not to make them sound too alike! I also struggle with that /Scowl/
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Lin Lan
This chapter was seriously so interesting /Smile/ it got thrilling, it keeps getting better and better, I think the only missing thing now is that the stalker is a little dull, he's just saying a few things every now and then, I'd love to see the initiative and it would really make my heat skip a beat If he snapped and sounded more not "dull" I don't mind UT since that's probably what you're going for, and I know it will be really good but if he started talking differently it would be a surprise and a scare. The others characters aren't the same but sometimes they sound like him, be careful not to make them sound too alike! I also struggle with that /Scowl/
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Lin Lan
that's so sweet/Smile/
2025-09-21
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