The fl is reliable sometimes but I want to see her act more, like take matters into her own hands. As for the ML I want him to be more risky, show us he's crazy show us more of him. And also the other characters, that brings tension. And most importantly in a story, there has to be conflict!! Like Aarev we were biting our fingers to know what will happen to him? will he d¡e? will he be someone as crazy as our Ml? Or will something else happen? The story is interesting keep going I'm ur biggest fan!!
2025-09-10
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Lin Lan
Boy if you're that jealous be normal show up and treat her well, she'll fall in love for sure then /Shame/ but you just gotta do the extra steps.
2025-09-10
2
Lin Lan
I'm sorry bb authy but I think this is supossed ti be in tge middle, it's fine even if you don't change it, just thought I'd tell u❤️
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Lin Lan
The fl is reliable sometimes but I want to see her act more, like take matters into her own hands. As for the ML I want him to be more risky, show us he's crazy show us more of him. And also the other characters, that brings tension. And most importantly in a story, there has to be conflict!! Like Aarev we were biting our fingers to know what will happen to him? will he d¡e? will he be someone as crazy as our Ml? Or will something else happen? The story is interesting keep going I'm ur biggest fan!!
2025-09-10
2
Lin Lan
Boy if you're that jealous be normal show up and treat her well, she'll fall in love for sure then /Shame/ but you just gotta do the extra steps.
2025-09-10
2
Lin Lan
I'm sorry bb authy but I think this is supossed ti be in tge middle, it's fine even if you don't change it, just thought I'd tell u❤️
2025-09-10
1