you could have replied to my comment instead of mentioning in the end of the chapter...
any how I feel as a reader I have my right to comment my opinion and as a author you also have right to respond to comment......
i feel you should take but positive and negative feedback in a healthy way ,as your uploading your story in open platform everyone will have different opinions.....if readers are being rude and abuse you can reply to them as you wish ....
as a teakook fan even in fictional world I didn't want see them in such conditions, so I have commented my opinion . as I liked your way of narration and style of writing I wanted some imaginary character instead of teakook so I won't feel heavy hearted while reading..... anyhow now I can't read your stories anymore 😔
2025-10-23
10
Alka Prasad
ab inhe kya hi kahe kuch smjh m hi ni Ara meri to ki inhe kya bolu m wo Banda Inka son in law is rishtey tak ki respect nhi kri inhone ye Ameer log khud ko smjhte kya hai ki ye kisi ke sath b kuch b kr sakte hai or sach bolu to krte b hai or inhe koi nhi rikta koi inhe bolta ki aap galat kr re ho ya kuch bhi kya galti thi us ladke ki bas ye ki wo gareeb tha apne bande ke liye loyal tha sirf uske sath khush rahna chahta tha Abe mne to socha tha ki wo mrs jeon hi h sare fasad ki jad but ye to us se b char kadam age nikal gye apni need ko satisfied krne ke liye ek hasta khelta parivar khatam kr diya inhone or wo kisi or ka nhi khud ke bete ka chiiii
2025-10-23
0
$KM🧐
- now i am a little bit afraid of commenting something now.... who knows you may mention me in your chapter... - but still author please don't make harun a outcome of ra*p3 .. please don't.... harun can't be jk's step brother type something cz then it will be really heartbreaking and kind of disturbing - i know you don't change you plot an won't change it too.... and... i am not asking you to change anything . - i really appreciate your work and will do that ... bt just think about it ok.. ☺️
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Hani
you could have replied to my comment instead of mentioning in the end of the chapter...
any how I feel as a reader I have my right to comment my opinion and as a author you also have right to respond to comment......
i feel you should take but positive and negative feedback in a healthy way ,as your uploading your story in open platform everyone will have different opinions.....if readers are being rude and abuse you can reply to them as you wish ....
as a teakook fan even in fictional world I didn't want see them in such conditions, so I have commented my opinion . as I liked your way of narration and style of writing I wanted some imaginary character instead of teakook so I won't feel heavy hearted while reading..... anyhow now I can't read your stories anymore 😔
2025-10-23
10
Alka Prasad
ab inhe kya hi kahe kuch smjh m hi ni Ara meri to ki inhe kya bolu m wo Banda Inka son in law is rishtey tak ki respect nhi kri inhone ye Ameer log khud ko smjhte kya hai ki ye kisi ke sath b kuch b kr sakte hai or sach bolu to krte b hai or inhe koi nhi rikta koi inhe bolta ki aap galat kr re ho ya kuch bhi kya galti thi us ladke ki bas ye ki wo gareeb tha apne bande ke liye loyal tha sirf uske sath khush rahna chahta tha Abe mne to socha tha ki wo mrs jeon hi h sare fasad ki jad but ye to us se b char kadam age nikal gye apni need ko satisfied krne ke liye ek hasta khelta parivar khatam kr diya inhone or wo kisi or ka nhi khud ke bete ka chiiii
2025-10-23
0
$KM🧐
- now i am a little bit afraid of commenting something now.... who knows you may mention me in your chapter...
- but still author please don't make harun a outcome of ra*p3 .. please don't.... harun can't be jk's step brother type something cz then it will be really heartbreaking and kind of disturbing
- i know you don't change you plot an won't change it too.... and... i am not asking you to change anything .
- i really appreciate your work and will do that ... bt just think about it ok.. ☺️
2025-10-23
0