Also, I didn't see the point of the title being reflected in the plot, which was a bit disappointing. The slow burn of some couples' relationships was frustrating, with no improvement, while other couples' relationships moved too fast, without much interaction or getting to know each other. It felt like some relationships were rushed, while others were dragging on. There were many other things I noticed, but I can't point them all out. One thing that did stand out to me, though, was the introduction of Tristan as a new character, it was intriguing and added a fresh perspective to the story. I also enjoyed the sweet and romantic moments between Cass and Kael, I guess their chemistry was palpable. If I were to offer some suggestions for improvement, I'd say that adding more sensory details could help bring the story to life. For example, describing the setting, characters' appearances, or their emotions in more detail could make the story more immersive. Additionally, considering a more consistent pacing and clearer character motivations might help to enhance the narrative.
2025-06-23
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Wade
My honest thoughts about this story are that in the first chapter, I got confused about the characters' details, especially their connections to each other. I was also confused about what the parentheses referred to, their emotions or actions. Additionally, the POV felt a bit messy, and it seemed like the chapters weren't aligned with what the plot wanted to portray. Despite the confusion, the engaging characters kept me reading, Although there were grammatical errors, they didn't detract from the story's overall impact. Errors are common in every story, and as long as the narrative remains understandable, they're manageable. However, the story had several lacks. The emotions and actions weren't well develop. Each chapter was also very short, feeling like just a conversation without narrative or clear POV. It didn't feel like a story, just a series of conversations without dynamics. The characters didn't have proper communication or romantic development. I felt like I was reading a transcript rather than a story.
2025-06-23
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Wade
I didn't quite get the title 'The Villain Who Marked Me'. Vael's character doesn't feel villainous to me, he comes off more as a typical CEO without any intimidating presence. Even his mysterious aura feels lacking. The ABO dynamics and rare gender aspects didn't really add anything unique or meaningful to the story. I also didn't notice any 'marking' event in the story. The relationship between the leads feels more like friendship or even acquaintances, lacking in depth. Other couples in the story have similar dynamics, which might be intentional but weren't effectively conveyed. The plot moves really quickly, making it feel like a short story rather than a fully fleshed-out narrative. Maybe it's just me, but I felt like key elements hinted at in the title were either missing or underdeveloped.
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Wade
Also, I didn't see the point of the title being reflected in the plot, which was a bit disappointing. The slow burn of some couples' relationships was frustrating, with no improvement, while other couples' relationships moved too fast, without much interaction or getting to know each other. It felt like some relationships were rushed, while others were dragging on. There were many other things I noticed, but I can't point them all out. One thing that did stand out to me, though, was the introduction of Tristan as a new character, it was intriguing and added a fresh perspective to the story. I also enjoyed the sweet and romantic moments between Cass and Kael, I guess their chemistry was palpable. If I were to offer some suggestions for improvement, I'd say that adding more sensory details could help bring the story to life. For example, describing the setting, characters' appearances, or their emotions in more detail could make the story more immersive. Additionally, considering a more consistent pacing and clearer character motivations might help to enhance the narrative.
2025-06-23
0
Wade
My honest thoughts about this story are that in the first chapter, I got confused about the characters' details, especially their connections to each other. I was also confused about what the parentheses referred to, their emotions or actions. Additionally, the POV felt a bit messy, and it seemed like the chapters weren't aligned with what the plot wanted to portray. Despite the confusion, the engaging characters kept me reading, Although there were grammatical errors, they didn't detract from the story's overall impact. Errors are common in every story, and as long as the narrative remains understandable, they're manageable. However, the story had several lacks. The emotions and actions weren't well develop. Each chapter was also very short, feeling like just a conversation without narrative or clear POV. It didn't feel like a story, just a series of conversations without dynamics. The characters didn't have proper communication or romantic development. I felt like I was reading a transcript rather than a story.
2025-06-23
0
Wade
I didn't quite get the title 'The Villain Who Marked Me'. Vael's character doesn't feel villainous to me, he comes off more as a typical CEO without any intimidating presence. Even his mysterious aura feels lacking. The ABO dynamics and rare gender aspects didn't really add anything unique or meaningful to the story. I also didn't notice any 'marking' event in the story. The relationship between the leads feels more like friendship or even acquaintances, lacking in depth. Other couples in the story have similar dynamics, which might be intentional but weren't effectively conveyed. The plot moves really quickly, making it feel like a short story rather than a fully fleshed-out narrative. Maybe it's just me, but I felt like key elements hinted at in the title were either missing or underdeveloped.
2025-06-23
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