This is what the Enigma looks like. Btw, author, I've just noticed that their traits aren't showing that much, it lacks some emotions and feelings. In my opinion, author, I think you need to add more suspense or intimidating characteristics to each character to really bring out their personalities. For example, author, I notice that Vael doesn't give off the vibes of an enigma, same with the other characteristics of omega, beta, and alpha, they seem a bit too straightforward. We know that Enigmas are powerful and above alphas, they can make alphas, omegas, or even betas weak or be killed just by releasing their pheromones, unlike alphas, but not to the same extent as Enigmas. This aspect of their power should be reflected in their demeanor and interactions. As for the rare types, I don't have any comments because I can see that they show what rare types' characteristics really are, but perhaps adding more depth to the more common types would enhance the story overall.
PS: It's only my observation and opinion while reading it author, so hope you won't be mad, :)
2025-06-22
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Wade II
I think the asterisk is more suitable for use when they're thinking or thought, and parentheses/brackets for showing their emotions or actions, and quotation marks for POV or if they're talking.
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Wade II
This is what the Enigma looks like. Btw, author, I've just noticed that their traits aren't showing that much, it lacks some emotions and feelings. In my opinion, author, I think you need to add more suspense or intimidating characteristics to each character to really bring out their personalities. For example, author, I notice that Vael doesn't give off the vibes of an enigma, same with the other characteristics of omega, beta, and alpha, they seem a bit too straightforward. We know that Enigmas are powerful and above alphas, they can make alphas, omegas, or even betas weak or be killed just by releasing their pheromones, unlike alphas, but not to the same extent as Enigmas. This aspect of their power should be reflected in their demeanor and interactions. As for the rare types, I don't have any comments because I can see that they show what rare types' characteristics really are, but perhaps adding more depth to the more common types would enhance the story overall.
PS: It's only my observation and opinion while reading it author, so hope you won't be mad, :)
2025-06-22
2
Wade II
I think the asterisk is more suitable for use when they're thinking or thought, and parentheses/brackets for showing their emotions or actions, and quotation marks for POV or if they're talking.
2025-06-22
2
Cosmic Angel
This is a good one 🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭
2025-06-22
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