seriously? i literally thought you are a good writer but you are destroying your own story by adding bullshit... atleast maintain a image of yourself as a writer... you have already stretched the story by making unnecessary misunderstanding & all... I'm feeling like I've wasted my time in this book... gonna leave bad review in insta for sure for future readers...
2025-06-14
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Mav
the flow has stopped, like the water on the water slide tunnel is gone and I'm stuck in the dark... too many ideas might lead a great story to a sudden death. kook and tae are going along well, why cut the flow and change the plot now? doesn't look like a good twist to me but it's your story author, write however you want it to be, sorry I've got nothing else to say.
2024-07-23
78
Manja Nis
sigh 😔do whatever you want authy as is your story so doesn't need to ask about anyone opponent just do what you like.. also sorry for my previous comments
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Rose 🌹
seriously? i literally thought you are a good writer but you are destroying your own story by adding bullshit... atleast maintain a image of yourself as a writer... you have already stretched the story by making unnecessary misunderstanding & all... I'm feeling like I've wasted my time in this book... gonna leave bad review in insta for sure for future readers...
2025-06-14
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Mav
the flow has stopped, like the water on the water slide tunnel is gone and I'm stuck in the dark... too many ideas might lead a great story to a sudden death. kook and tae are going along well, why cut the flow and change the plot now? doesn't look like a good twist to me but it's your story author, write however you want it to be, sorry I've got nothing else to say.
2024-07-23
78
Manja Nis
sigh 😔do whatever you want authy as is your story so doesn't need to ask about anyone opponent just do what you like.. also sorry for my previous comments
2025-06-06
0