well, sorry to say we are not immature like him, we will always talk with our partner, shout at them but not run like him... I'm sorry you are a great writer but your characters lack maturity... you need to upgrade that or if you are working with immature character then it's okay, we can understand, I'm reading books from 4 years now.... so I can atleast tell what's wrong with a character...
2025-06-10
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xxxxcth
noo priorities comes first tae jk first 😭😭🙏🏻🙏🏻
2025-06-22
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Rose 🌹
for yourself... log ate jate rehenge kiya tum khud jina chor doge ??
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Rose 🌹
well, sorry to say we are not immature like him, we will always talk with our partner, shout at them but not run like him... I'm sorry you are a great writer but your characters lack maturity... you need to upgrade that or if you are working with immature character then it's okay, we can understand, I'm reading books from 4 years now.... so I can atleast tell what's wrong with a character...
2025-06-10
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xxxxcth
noo priorities comes first tae jk first 😭😭🙏🏻🙏🏻
2025-06-22
1
Rose 🌹
for yourself... log ate jate rehenge kiya tum khud jina chor doge ??
2025-06-10
1