author..can't you just elaborate some 18+ stuff detailed..you just write they did it..as we reader read the story..as a reader's point of view I want to read..as we read the story the ups and downs of the characters..we connected to them by mind and also heart..but their happy moments and them being one by not only souls but also bodies..this little things gives us assurance that they are having bright future..so please this is a request from me as a reader keep this thing in mind..don't offend by my words I am just sharing my thoughts what I felt about story..I hope my words help you in your stories to make your stories more spicy..OK by byy author🙃
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shinchan
author..can't you just elaborate some 18+ stuff detailed..you just write they did it..as we reader read the story..as a reader's point of view I want to read..as we read the story the ups and downs of the characters..we connected to them by mind and also heart..but their happy moments and them being one by not only souls but also bodies..this little things gives us assurance that they are having bright future..so please this is a request from me as a reader keep this thing in mind..don't offend by my words I am just sharing my thoughts what I felt about story..I hope my words help you in your stories to make your stories more spicy..OK by byy author🙃
2022-07-25
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