well there are few grammatical errors and at few places you have missed some words....well it happens to most of the writers....it was the same for me too.....just when you finish writing recheck it so that you will get the points.....I am not saying you have done a bad work just a small suggestion which will help in making your work better....hope I didn't speak a lot.....
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2021-06-06
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Anshu
well there are few grammatical errors and at few places you have missed some words....well it happens to most of the writers....it was the same for me too.....just when you finish writing recheck it so that you will get the points.....I am not saying you have done a bad work just a small suggestion which will help in making your work better....hope I didn't speak a lot.....
2021-03-11
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Aamir Haider
yes plx pictures makes story more interesting
2021-02-28
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