when reality is way too different from what we imagine that hurts a lot... the conveyance of feeling is the key to the good story. you achieved that in this chapter.
2021-04-22
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Peonies
story is great there... are some minute mistakes... reread these epi you will find in it.... other all is well .... I like the characters of laia more.... I see how she will become and independent girl.... -mtn community reader
2021-02-01
1
💘 Neha 💘 (つ≧▽≦)つ Mtnp ❤️
Alright. Let me say my favourite part was when laia and Vlad where thinking about each other how they will... I internally shipped them.
And it's good that Laia realize that being alone is not always so amazing how we thinki it would be.
Well, I suppose you have written in hurry to complete it on time, but remember to reread afterwards so you can get rid of silly mistakes nothing much.
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kate MTN (R)(P)
when reality is way too different from what we imagine that hurts a lot... the conveyance of feeling is the key to the good story. you achieved that in this chapter.
2021-04-22
1
Peonies
story is great there... are some minute mistakes... reread these epi you will find in it....
other all is well .... I like the characters of laia more.... I see how she will become and independent girl....
-mtn community reader
2021-02-01
1
💘 Neha 💘 (つ≧▽≦)つ Mtnp ❤️
Alright. Let me say my favourite part was when laia and Vlad where thinking about each other how they will... I internally shipped them.
And it's good that Laia realize that being alone is not always so amazing how we thinki it would be.
Well, I suppose you have written in hurry to complete it on time, but remember to reread afterwards so you can get rid of silly mistakes nothing much.
I love the story author
~Reader Neha from Mtn community
2021-01-08
1