etto... sorry if it sound little like judge. I like the story lines, the FL's character, the detail you put it in, and the effort you pour in this story. I don't know about grammar, but I hope you can add punctuation to the characters' lines (because honestly I get confused when they talk, especially when the lines are long)
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Vrinda Nair
I really love this story 😍💕
2021-04-22
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Ardhya
etto... sorry if it sound little like judge. I like the story lines, the FL's character, the detail you put it in, and the effort you pour in this story. I don't know about grammar, but I hope you can add punctuation to the characters' lines (because honestly I get confused when they talk, especially when the lines are long)
2021-02-10
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nino
plzzz don't stop the story dear author
2020-11-27
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