Rules Rules... The story needs to pace up. I feel it's moving a bit slow. Description is awesome. it clearly tells what is happening. The development between the characters are awesome. The way they interact feel so real.
~reader from MTN community
2021-08-30
0
🌠ꜱʜᴏᴏᴛɪɴɢ ꜱᴛᴀʀ🌠 🅜🅣🅝🅟
Aww he's so cute and warm from inside!!! I find him really approachable it's just that he doesn't socialize himself!! His little deeds of love towards Bella... the headphones, how they slept like that peacefully and without worries... they're literally a match made in heaven!!!! Their chemistry is smooth and so beautiful it literally hits me with the cupid's arrow 💘
-Reader from MTN Community
2021-08-30
4
Hale💤MTN
Gosh I loved this chapter. I knew zack was nice guy. I loved another thing how the author explained every small details that was really nice . and another thing giving importance to every characters is my personal favorite so well done so far
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kate MTN (R)(P)
Rules Rules... The story needs to pace up. I feel it's moving a bit slow. Description is awesome. it clearly tells what is happening. The development between the characters are awesome. The way they interact feel so real.
~reader from MTN community
2021-08-30
0
🌠ꜱʜᴏᴏᴛɪɴɢ ꜱᴛᴀʀ🌠 🅜🅣🅝🅟
Aww he's so cute and warm from inside!!! I find him really approachable it's just that he doesn't socialize himself!! His little deeds of love towards Bella... the headphones, how they slept like that peacefully and without worries... they're literally a match made in heaven!!!! Their chemistry is smooth and so beautiful it literally hits me with the cupid's arrow 💘
-Reader from MTN Community
2021-08-30
4
Hale💤MTN
Gosh I loved this chapter. I knew zack was nice guy. I loved another thing how the author explained every small details that was really nice . and another thing giving importance to every characters is my personal favorite so well done so far
-Reader from MTN community
2021-08-30
0