it's a good story you are great just keep going so it won't leave (us) in a cliffhanger that's all
2021-09-24
1
jessica
the story is good, but the development between the characters could improve and the wording is a little hard to follow maybe from the translation. maybe someone could help edit the story as you go?
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Lopolo
it's a good story you are great just keep going so it won't leave (us) in a cliffhanger that's all
2021-09-24
1
jessica
the story is good, but the development between the characters could improve and the wording is a little hard to follow maybe from the translation. maybe someone could help edit the story as you go?
2021-04-12
3
Ramensforlife
Yes feed him please 😂
2021-04-10
2