Reading this felt like a waste of time. The plot is chaotic, the characters behave like cardboard cutouts, and the pacing is a mess — scenes either rush or drag for no reason. Dialogue is awkward and doesn’t reveal anything real about the characters. The story pretends to be meaningful but is actually baffling. If this is the best the author could do, it’s an insult to readers’ patience. You owe your followers a better effort.
2025-10-16
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vgukkieawwwiw
i knew it u are going to make me a fool u made me guess but 😭
2025-10-08
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gotta.go
ITS A REALLY BAD STORY LIKE WHO THE HELL MAKE STORIES LIKE THIS THIS STORY IS WORSE THAN UR BEHAVIOUR I HATE IT 🤢 ITS REALLY BAD , HORRIBLE EWWWWWW 🤮
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gotta.go
Reading this felt like a waste of time. The plot is chaotic, the characters behave like cardboard cutouts, and the pacing is a mess — scenes either rush or drag for no reason. Dialogue is awkward and doesn’t reveal anything real about the characters. The story pretends to be meaningful but is actually baffling. If this is the best the author could do, it’s an insult to readers’ patience. You owe your followers a better effort.
2025-10-16
0
vgukkieawwwiw
i knew it u are going to make me a fool u made me guess but 😭
2025-10-08
1
gotta.go
ITS A REALLY BAD STORY LIKE WHO THE HELL MAKE STORIES LIKE THIS
THIS STORY IS WORSE THAN UR BEHAVIOUR I HATE IT 🤢
ITS REALLY BAD
, HORRIBLE EWWWWWW 🤮
2025-10-16
0