hello I loved your story but I would like to point out some mistake or something which don't make sense 1.the fl is powerful she have money everything so she can take her parents business again even if she not at that age limit she can use power 2. Pls make the episode big 3. AS you making her scene she is not related to mafia I mena like underworld of mafia so u just mention it like she do this secretly no ons know who she is or if u want to reveal she justice who help women so when ml has ask to find deeper then u should say it she justice etc. 4. and fl need to marry to get her parents business its sound good but not good too cuz u mention she fearless and power etc add something that first she did not know whay they were behind and she know when she became big and helping women through her connection she know abt company and she not leaving bcz there some information she want to get from her uncle aunt 5.YOUR story are awesome I will be happy some thing add to make more sense and im so grateful to get author like u best ,and a req upload daily and big
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hello I loved your story but I would like to point out some mistake or something which don't make sense
1.the fl is powerful she have money everything so she can take her parents business again even if she not at that age limit she can use power
2. Pls make the episode big
3. AS you making her scene she is not related to mafia I mena like underworld of mafia so u just mention it like she do this secretly no ons know who she is or if u want to reveal she justice who help women so when ml has ask to find deeper then u should say it she justice etc.
4. and fl need to marry to get her parents business its sound good but not good too cuz u mention she fearless and power etc add something that first she did not know whay they were behind and she know when she became big and helping women through her connection she know abt company and she not leaving bcz there some information she want to get from her uncle aunt
5.YOUR story are awesome I will be happy some thing add to make more sense and im so grateful to get author like u best ,and a req upload daily and big
2025-09-14
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