The story is getting boring like it has been 80 episodes and still nothing changes!! whole storyline is based on Taehyung - you should address him as Taehyung in the storyline writing his nickname always - make the dialogue look so weak-- and where's the Jungkook role?? he's whole personality is he's Taehyung boyfriend. and where's the drama;! all chapters lack emotions - you should give more screen time to Jungkook and make Taehyung a little bit mature -🥀and yeah !! reveal some plot also because it's literally 80 chapters and I still haven't gotten anything!! you have potential itoo use it.
2025-09-25
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*~☆•°might_write_sometime°•☆~*
hey authy...I'm back again... I wish you good nerves and joy in writing...you're doing great. I just wanted to ask or just write here, that after my few-day pause nobody is reading my story anymore🥲 I want to keep going but I have written many more episodes yet no new people are coming😥. So, if anyone finished reading this comment...please give a chance to my work called: Island
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sasha~🎀
The story is getting boring like it has been 80 episodes and still nothing changes!! whole storyline is based on Taehyung - you should address him as Taehyung in the storyline writing his nickname always - make the dialogue look so weak-- and where's the Jungkook role?? he's whole personality is he's Taehyung boyfriend. and where's the drama;! all chapters lack emotions - you should give more screen time to Jungkook and make Taehyung a little bit mature -🥀and yeah !! reveal some plot also because it's literally 80 chapters and I still haven't gotten anything!! you have potential itoo use it.
2025-09-25
1
*~☆•°might_write_sometime°•☆~*
hey authy...I'm back again...
I wish you good nerves and joy in writing...you're doing great. I just wanted to ask or just write here, that after my few-day pause nobody is reading my story anymore🥲 I want to keep going but I have written many more episodes yet no new people are coming😥. So, if anyone finished reading this comment...please give a chance to my work called: Island
2025-10-07
1
lovetaekook145😍
baby are u busy 😵😩? are u ok? 🥺🥺
2025-10-07
1