Rewrite Our Love - A Taekook Rebirth
Episode 1
Your Innocent author
Hii my eclipsed hearts 🥰
Your Innocent author
it's your authyy
Your Innocent author
This is my first story .
It's inspired by my favourite comic so i thought to make a taekook version of it. Please don't report my story 🙏🏻
Your Innocent author
ok so let's start .....
Somewhere in a place untouched by light, an innocent soul lay trembling.
He couldn’t see—blindfolded, bound, exposed. His skin shivered under the cold air, but the heat that hovered over him came from something darker… hungrier.
The man never showed his face. Only his hands—rough, controlling, insistent. His voice, deep and low, called him “angel” as if mocking the innocence he was tearing apart.
Fear was constant. The ache, unbearable. He wanted to run, to scream, to disappear. And once, he did try.
But the escape was brief.
Someone
Shivering (I've never thought of this , but among all the killing weapons ...)
Someone
(Apart from cold blades)
？？？
My little angel is amazing
？？？
Blind as you are you could run away that far ..
How shall I punish you ... ?😈
Someone
(The most fatal ones are actually WARM HANDS )
The man caught him—angrier, crueler—and punished him the only way he knew how. Again, and again, like a starving beast devouring something far too sweet.
Someone
Ahhh... ( he seems not being able to feel tired . His constant of attacking me)
Someone
(Makes me shattered in pieces )
And through it all, he whispered things. Not just of lust… but of possession. As if binding him was not enough—he wanted to own his soul.
Someone
Shivering and crying (In the dark, his eyes are tinted with scarlet by lust
Like a hungry beast ,
He smells the warmth of my body and swallow it without mercy)
Someone
It hurts 😫... ( shouting )
( he is biting his prey angrily with his angry teeth )
？？？
My angel , be a good boy or it'll hurt you more
？？？
I'll lock you up and make you stay forever , then you won't be able to escape from me again...
But the desire of ruining him too..
The dream ends—but the nightmare continues
He feels cold.
He’s falling.
No... he's drowning.
Someone
What… is this...?
My body—it's heavy...
I can’t… breathe.
His limbs flail uselessly. The water pulls him under, and everything spins.
(Gasping , air rushing in )Am I dying again...?
No… no...
Not like this.
???..
Mr.! Mr., can you hear me?!"
And just as his spirit began to break—
—he woke up.
Gasping.
Sweating.
Alive.
A dream, he told himself. Just a nightmare.
But the weight on his chest… the phantom touch…
It all felt too real.
The voice is unfamiliar. The concern in it is real.
A hand touches his forehead—gentle, trembling.
It feels… human. Soft. Comforting
Someone
(This isn’t the dream.
This… isn’t even my world.)
???..
Thank moon goddess..
You are awake .
Pale skin, delicate features, long lashes, wet black hair clinging to his face.
???..
Mr. can you speak 🗣️....
Kim Taehyung ( rare omega)
I can ....
Kim Taehyung ( rare omega)
Where ...
Kim Taehyung ( rare omega)
Where am I??
THE SECOND ELDEST OMEGA SON OF KIM FAMILY, KIM TAEHYUNG
Kim Taehyung ( rare omega)
( what were those images of the blind boy in my mind? He looked just like me.)
Kim Taehyung ( rare omega)
( And who's the guy with the silver dove mask ?? ) {confused}
Kim Taehyung ( rare omega)
(eyes widened) { Didn't I just get pushed by the cliff and died}
Kim Taehyung ( rare omega)
Or could it be I'm reborn ??
He sits on the floor, drenched and dazed.
Silence echoes around the grand room—
Until he hears a voice.
Jeon Jaehyun ( enigma)
Huh !
He looks up—
A child. Maybe five years old.
Sitting on a velvet chair too big for him,
A fairy tale book open in his lap, eyes wide in awe.
Jeon Jaehyun ( enigma)
(Happy as well as shocked) has rhe heavens given a little mermaid to me??🥰
Kim Taehyung ( rare omega)
huh!?
Before he can move, the child jumps off the chair and dashes toward him, little feet pattering across marble.
Jeon Jaehyun ( enigma)
Beautiful boyy.. I'm Jeon Jaehyun, the favoured heir of the Jeon corporation.
Jeon Jaehyun ( enigma)
Are you the little mermaid in the story?? (excited 😆)
Kim Taehyung ( rare omega)
Hey put on your pants first .
Kim Taehyung ( rare omega)
(he thinks that I am a mermaid because I am drenched ? What a naive child)
Tiny arms wrap around his neck.
The boy climbs into his lap without fear.
His eyes sparkle like stars
Jeon Jaehyun ( enigma)
The ending of the story isn't right !
The little mermaid from the story didn't become a foam and get away . He actually came here and became my girlfriend
Jeon Jaehyun ( enigma)
Can I keep you pretty boy??
Kim Taehyung ( rare omega)
Just wait another ten years to think about a girlfriend
Taehyung stares, speechless.
The boy’s warmth is unfamiliar… yet comforting.
And his name—Jeon Jaehyun—sends a shiver down Taehyung’s spine.
Kim Taehyung ( rare omega)
Waitt... (thinking)
His heart stirs.
Somewhere deep inside, something begins to unravel.
Kim Taehyung ( rare omega)
(Eyes hit in realisation) Your name is Jeon Jaehyun??
Kim Taehyung ( rare omega)
( Jeon Jaehyun is my husband's only son in my previous life . He's also my stepson!)
THE ONLY BAD HISTORY OF MR. KIM IN HIS PREVIOUS LIFE
Kim Taehyung ( rare omega)
{I'm my previous life , I'm the second eldest omega son of the kim family and everyone bullies me and sees me as a punch bag}
Kim Taehyung ( rare omega)
{MY ONLY MERIT IS MY BEAUTY SO I GET TO MARRY INTO THE JEON FAMILY WHICH IS AT THE TOP OF LADDER IN THE WHOLE COUNTRY}
Kim Taehyung ( rare omega)
{BUT I DON'T LIKE MY HUSBAND , JEON JUNGKOOK,THE CEO OF JEON CORP. AND ALWAYS NEGLECT HIM}
Kim Taehyung ( rare omega)
(ALTHOUGH MY STEP SON JAEHYUN, TRIES TO GET ME LIKE HIM, I NEVER DO}
Kim Taehyung ( rare omega)
( I THEN GET TRICKED BY ANOTHER WICKED MAN AMD ELOPES WITH HIM . IT TURNS OUT THAT HE IS PARTNERED WITH MY STEP SISTER AMD I END UP GETTING MURDERED BY THEM!}
????
Taehyung, you ask for it !
????
Go to hell to reunite with your stupid mother and little brother😈😈
Jaehyun is in tae's arms, playing .
Kim Taehyung ( rare omega)
{ He is so cute and how come I didn't like him in my previous life}
Jeon Jaehyun ( enigma)
(giggling)
Kim Taehyung ( rare omega)
{I will treat him well in this new life and make him like me again}
They were so happy...
But ... Someone will always be there to disturb ...
Carlee (maid)
Heyy you ! Who are you ! How dare you peek at young master in the toilet !
Carlee (maid)
Don't touch the young master with your dirty hands !
BOTH: SHUT UP COLD ❄️ ( DOMINEERING AND SCARY Aura)
and then suddenly .
Jae starts dragging tae, holding his hands
Jeon Jaehyun ( enigma)
Miss, let's get you changed into a beautiful dress. Today is my dad's 27 year old birthday .
Just like you he is also very attractive 😍
Kim Taehyung ( rare omega)
( remembers ){Jungkook 's 27 year old birthday party!?}
Kim Taehyung ( rare omega)
( eyes widen) I see I'm reborn and come to the party two years ago . Jk will choose his wife here.
Kim Taehyung ( rare omega)
{ I REMEMBER THAT HE USED TO GATHER UP ALL THE CLASSY AND BEAUTIFUL OMEGAS IN A LUXURIOUS YATCHT . LIKE A EMPEROR, HE SELECTS SOMEONE TO GET MARRIED TO HER}
Kim Taehyung ( rare omega)
{ ALL THE TOP CLASS LADIES TRY TO GET TO TAHT YACHT AND I GOT SELECTED TAHT NIGHT .}
Kim Taehyung ( rare omega)
( to jae) Can you take me to see your daddy? I have something very important to tell him.( tries to convince)
Jeon Jaehyun ( enigma)
Huhh?
The little mermaid wants to marry daddy and become mommy?
Jeon Jaehyun ( enigma)
( dead serious look) I want you to marry me but instead , you want to marry my daddy !?
Jeon Jaehyun ( enigma)
But a real gentleman like me won't refuse an OMEGAS request. I will take you to see daddy now.(gives innocent look)
Jeon Jaehyun ( enigma)
(evil smile) 😈 I don't need to worry . When daddy died , I'll inherit everything including you.
Kim Taehyung ( rare omega)
( the smile doesn't go unnoticed by the one 👈🏻) { The wicked smile of his is just like his dad's}
jae, starts showing tae the way
Kim Taehyung ( rare omega)
( determined) { BUT IN THIS LIFE OF MINE , I'LL SETTLE MY SCORE WITH THE KIM FAMILY AND LIVE AGAIN}
Kim Taehyung ( rare omega)
Your Innocent author
How was it .
Your Innocent author
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Kim Taehyung ( rare omega)
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Jeon Jaehyun ( enigma)
byee bye
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