you know I like your story concept but the only thing you need to improve is your dialogue delivery, when you write the dialogues see if the words are feeling right or if you will talk to someone like that. over all , evrything is good ,all the best...you can ignore my comment if you think it's offensive don't worry
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finding myself
you know I like your story concept but the only thing you need to improve is your dialogue delivery, when you write the dialogues see if the words are feeling right or if you will talk to someone like that. over all , evrything is good ,all the best...you can ignore my comment if you think it's offensive don't worry
2025-10-05
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