I read the story up to this point. and i wanna convey something to the author. It might be offensive,so before starting ,I am sorry.
I kind of didn't like the story. The way of your writing is really good,but the plot kind of needs some improvement.
1. sudden wedding of taekook. It's like a wedding on impulse,rather than out of love. 2. Taehyung is forced to this marriage. He didn't even know he was getting married until he reached the altar. So, the family ( whole family,jeon,kim ,park) are being so manipulative. not like a loving and caring family. 3. jungkook is acting so inconsideration. He like taehyung,then act like it.try to woo him. not forcefully getting married like a spoiled kid. even after marriage, he thinks everything is ok and good. No, if you wanna earn his love act like that. not like, he married me , so he have to love him.
there is soo many errors like that. but these 3 are getting on my nerves the most. even this chapter. he said, he doent need icecream. so,no ,dont force him. atleast understand that he didn't like the fact he is forced onto this and try to win his love .
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army
I read the story up to this point. and i wanna convey something to the author. It might be offensive,so before starting ,I am sorry.
I kind of didn't like the story. The way of your writing is really good,but the plot kind of needs some improvement.
1. sudden wedding of taekook. It's like a wedding on impulse,rather than out of love.
2. Taehyung is forced to this marriage. He didn't even know he was getting married until he reached the altar. So, the family ( whole family,jeon,kim ,park) are being so manipulative. not like a loving and caring family.
3. jungkook is acting so inconsideration. He like taehyung,then act like it.try to woo him. not forcefully getting married like a spoiled kid. even after marriage, he thinks everything is ok and good. No, if you wanna earn his love act like that. not like, he married me , so he have to love him.
there is soo many errors like that. but these 3 are getting on my nerves the most. even this chapter. he said, he doent need icecream. so,no ,dont force him. atleast understand that he didn't like the fact he is forced onto this and try to win his love .
again,iam sorry if you feel offended.
2025-08-02
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