Author as ur old reader I just wanna advice u to focus more on emotions.... I just love ur stories but it lacks that deep emotional connections... feels a bit casual like yeah its happening just happening... just a lil bit advice not criticizing...
2025-07-21
7
Callous
And here I was thinking that my phone has some kind of problems😐😐
2025-07-21
10
NewNew
I nearly got a heart attack when the story was not updating... from last two day my story is on reviewing...
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🖤Vincy_im🖤
Author as ur old reader I just wanna advice u to focus more on emotions.... I just love ur stories but it lacks that deep emotional connections... feels a bit casual like yeah its happening just happening... just a lil bit advice not criticizing...
2025-07-21
7
Callous
And here I was thinking that my phone has some kind of problems😐😐
2025-07-21
10
NewNew
I nearly got a heart attack when the story was not updating... from last two day my story is on reviewing...
2025-07-21
10