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Wade II

Tho I'm not asking for a perfect story and didn't expect changes in the first place, I still hope this story will improve with you, author. I've noticed in your other stories that you don't have much knowledge about ABO, I guess. Also, you didn't explain anything about whether you have your own definition of abo or rare types, and that's why the story isn't properly written and clear. Like I said before, some of the plot doesn't match what the story or chapter portrays. This inconsistency makes it hard to fully immerse myself in the narrative. Providing more context or background information on these specific topics could really enhance the cs. It would also be helpful to clarify any unique terminology or concepts you're using to avoid confusion. With a bit more attention to detail, I think the story could really reach its full potential.

2025-06-30

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Wade II

Honestly, they are the same as in the other story, but there's a little difference. It has improved a bit, but it still lacks some emotions and feelings, and it's a little bit messy. I think the story will keep improving if you keep learning and developing your writing skills in this kind of story. I guess it's good, but I wouldn't say it's perfect or anything, bc I haven't seen any significant changes. Maybe a little, but the improvement isn't still there. There are a lot of holes in the plot of that story that make it hard to understand, and the alignment isn't that great. The characters could be fleshed out more, and the pacing feels a bit off. I'd love to see more depth and complexity in the narrative. With some more refinement, I think it could really be great.

2025-06-30

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