Here's a fully written and polished version of Zerozen Episode 2: “The Test Begins” — with clean dialogue, action, pacing, and emotion. This episode shows Takumi's struggle in the brutal Zerozen testing, highlighting his weakness… and his spark.
ZEROZEN – Episode 2: “The Test Begins”
[Scene 1 – Morning at Zerozen HQ]
Takumi stands nervously in the grand white hallway of the testing center. His heart is pounding. Suddenly, a calm and sharp voice calls out.
👩💼 HANA:
"Takumi Raien?"
👦 TAKUMI (turning quickly):
"Yes, that's me!"
👩💼 HANA (soft smile):
"I'm Hana, one of Ego’s assistants. I’ll escort you to your test zone."
👦 TAKUMI (nodding):
"Okay. Thanks."
They walk through sterile corridors, surrounded by screens and hidden cameras.
[Scene 2 – Testing Room]
Takumi enters a giant white room with high-tech lights. Hana stops at the booth and waves.
👦 TAKUMI:
"Thanks, Hana!"
👩💼 HANA (muttering to herself):
"What an idiot."
A smooth robotic voice echoes across the room.
🤖 AI SYSTEM:
"Welcome, Takumi Raien. Begin: Drill One – Heading Accuracy."
🔷 Drill One: Heading
A series of metallic launchers begin firing balls toward Takumi from random angles and heights. He jumps, misses, stumbles, and even gets hit in the face once.
⚽ Attempts: 20
✅ Successful Headers: 1
Takumi pants, hands on his knees, sweat dripping.
👦 TAKUMI:
"One… out of twenty. I… tried, right?"
🤖 AI:
"Conclusion: You are not built for football. Recommendation: Give up."
Takumi spits on the ground and clenches his fists.
👦 TAKUMI:
"Never."
[Booth – Observation Room]
👩💼 HANA (watching through the glass):
"That’s… some determination. But honestly, he's terrible."
🔶 Drill Two: Defending 1v1
An AI humanoid in a white jersey dribbles at Takumi with frightening precision. It performs sharp feints, elastico, nutmegs. Takumi lunges but is always too slow, too off-balance, or tricked.
⚽ Attempts: 20
❌ Successful Defends: 0
🤖 AI:
"Conclusion: Defensive instincts – nonexistent."
Takumi winces, clearly embarrassed.
🔷 Drill Three: Ball Control
A sequence begins: first touch tests, mid-air ball stops, trap-and-release routines. Balls fall from high angles, spin weirdly. Takumi struggles but manages a few soft controls.
⚽ Attempts: 20
✅ Successes: 3
🤖 AI:
"Your control is below developmental level."
👩💼 HANA (sighing):
"Okay… this AI might actually be right."
[Scene – Takumi’s Eyes Narrow]
But Takumi doesn’t back down.
👦 TAKUMI (gritting teeth):
"I’m not giving up. Not now."
🔴 Final Drill – Shooting
The atmosphere shifts. Red lights activate. 40 balls appear, and different zones on the goal light up randomly. The AI speaks:
🤖 AI:
"Target-based shooting. Difficulty: Adaptive. Precision Required."
Takumi steps back, breathes in. The first shot — top corner. Goal.
Second shot — another goal.
Third — off the bar.
Fourth — rebound.
Fifth — GOAL.
The booth goes quiet as Takumi unleashes precision, power, and purpose. He channels everything — his dream, Joãozinho, Louise, Axel.
⚽ Attempts: 40
✅ Goals: 28
👩💼 HANA (surprised):
"Wait… What?!"
[Scene – Final Score Appears on Screen]
📊 Test Score: 32 / 100
📄 Assigned Rank: 5 (Lowest Tier)
Takumi stands, breathing heavily, tears at the edge of his eyes.
👩💼 HANA (softly):
"You barely got into Rank 5… But you're still in."
👦 TAKUMI (tearing up):
"I still have a rank. I’m not out. Let’s go!!"
[Scene – Hallway Outside Test Center]
Takumi walks out. He spots a familiar figure — Shinobu, the boy with glasses.
👦 TAKUMI:
"Shin! Hey! What rank did you get?"
🤓 SHINOBU (adjusting glasses):
"Rank 5."
👦 TAKUMI (smiling wide):
"Yes! We’re in the same rank!"
🤓 SHINOBU (nodding):
"Yeah. But if we want to rise... we’ve got to be monsters."
💥 End of Episode 2
Next Episode: “The Real Battle Begins – Team Trials!”
Would you like the next episode to introduce Team Z and show the first scrimmage match where Takumi starts to awaken his potential?
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