and also till the very end jonah couldn't even find out who actually hurt his twin noah and I think this one point proves and shows how serious he was to get that so called "revenge" for his twin...and just blindly did whatever he thought was "revenge" but in reality he was two timing...till the very end he didn't even knew it was not either of the twins who raped Jonah...but it was riley....gosh now I'm feeling really bad for the author I think you were really careless while writing the story...
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Eligeti Preethi
•the third is noah ending up with Martin i mean he was not even there in the story since the beginning and since you showed Darius and daren as ml i thought he would end up with one of them but you just gave him a side character who was also jonah's friend and that martin really badmouthed noah and hurt noah it makes no sense he still end up with Martin..and yet his twin Jonah end up with one of the twin who showed as main ml...
2025-08-26
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Eligeti Preethi
it's a good story and the story really did justice to the title... •but I didn't really like the story just like the title jonah overshadowed noah in the story beginning noah was in the hospital he was treated very badly and noah wanted revenge.. as a reader I felt very bad and really hoped he could get revenge through his brother but really disappointed that jonah got diverted and felt like he was never serious to take revenge for his brother
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Eligeti Preethi
and also till the very end jonah couldn't even find out who actually hurt his twin noah and I think this one point proves and shows how serious he was to get that so called "revenge" for his twin...and just blindly did whatever he thought was "revenge" but in reality he was two timing...till the very end he didn't even knew it was not either of the twins who raped Jonah...but it was riley....gosh now I'm feeling really bad for the author I think you were really careless while writing the story...
2025-08-26
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Eligeti Preethi
•the third is noah ending up with Martin i mean he was not even there in the story since the beginning and since you showed Darius and daren as ml i thought he would end up with one of them but you just gave him a side character who was also jonah's friend and that martin really badmouthed noah and hurt noah it makes no sense he still end up with Martin..and yet his twin Jonah end up with one of the twin who showed as main ml...
2025-08-26
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Eligeti Preethi
it's a good story and the story really did justice to the title...
•but I didn't really like the story just like the title jonah overshadowed noah in the story beginning noah was in the hospital he was treated very badly and noah wanted revenge.. as a reader I felt very bad and really hoped he could get revenge through his brother but really disappointed that jonah got diverted and felt like he was never serious to take revenge for his brother
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