well author it's true that MC like this are irritating but reader comment your story and you got there idea and that how a person improve and make progress.... not take those words on heart , you story is good but there are some rooms to improve.... no one perfect and same as you .... not take those words on heart , you story is going well ❤️
2025-05-30
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jasmine
you deserve it cause nobody like a self respect less fl and ml who abuses fl
2025-05-30
2
<<{remember ME} __🖤>>
Dear authy you were doing great👍🏻and your story is really very nice I know that main Character are dumbass but it is ok because in last you will make pratim realise his mistake and he will start pursue manasvi, you have started writing so some shitty will come you just have to ignore them ok, understand don't take those words on your heart and if you wanna take some words on your heart so take this word ~keep updating authy~love you author Your lovely {remember me}
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__千Ã𝐝เ𝕟𝔤 卄𝑜pe__ 🖤~
well author it's true that MC like this are irritating but reader comment your story and you got there idea and that how a person improve and make progress.... not take those words on heart , you story is good but there are some rooms to improve.... no one perfect and same as you .... not take those words on heart , you story is going well ❤️
2025-05-30
2
jasmine
you deserve it cause nobody like a self respect less fl and ml who abuses fl
2025-05-30
2
<<{remember ME} __🖤>>
Dear authy you were doing great👍🏻and your story is really very nice I know that main Character are dumbass but it is ok because in last you will make pratim realise his mistake and he will start pursue manasvi, you have started writing so some shitty will come you just have to ignore them ok, understand don't take those words on your heart and if you wanna take some words on your heart so take this word ~keep updating authy~love you author
Your lovely
{remember me}
2025-06-16
4