Buraddi Rōtasu
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Buraddi Rōtasu — Episode 1: "The First Punch"
In a small old house, a young boy named Ren Asahi (朝日 蓮) 🌸 lived with his single mother, Yui Asahi (朝日 結衣) 💐.
Ren's father, the legendary bare-knuckle boxer Daisuke Suzuki 🥊 — known worldwide as "The Iron Will" — had abandoned them when Ren was still a toddler.
To protect Ren from danger and the fame that came with the Suzuki name, Yui had changed his last name to her own — Asahi.
That morning, Ren helped Yui carry heavy bags 🍅🥬 from the market.
He wiped his sweaty forehead, slung his schoolbag over his shoulder 🎒, and dashed towards Gakkō no Kamoku — his middle school.
But fate had other plans.
Two bullies, Hiroto and Souma, cornered him near the school gates 🏫.
Ren tried to run, but he wasn’t fast enough.
He was caught and beaten badly 💥.
Hiroto sneered, kicking dirt on him, "See this idiot? He couldn’t even outrun us!" 🤣
Souma added, laughing, "He had a 3km head start! We still caught that bastard!" 🤣🤣
The two walked away, leaving Ren bloody and humiliated.
On the ground, barely moving, Ren weakly raised a fist and cursed:
"Fuck you, Hiroto... Souma..." 🖕
Dragging himself across the concrete like a wounded animal 🩸, Ren finally crawled into his classroom — but the teacher immediately noticed his battered appearance and sent him to the principal's office.
He was warned for "causing trouble" he didn’t even start. 😔
After that mess, Ren sat alone on a giant tree branch 🌳 behind the school, nursing his wounds and bruised pride.
A voice called out:
"Yo." 😎
Ren looked up.
It was Jun, a senior from a higher class, standing with a lazy grin and a half-eaten rice ball 🍙 in his hand.
"I saw you get your ass kicked by Hiroto and Souma," Jun chuckled. "Plus you got in trouble too... Rough day, huh?" 😏
Ren didn’t reply. He just wiped his bloody lip.
"Listen," Jun said, leaning closer, "you got guts. You wanna learn how to really fight? Like... bare-knuckle fight?"
Ren's battered body ached, but something inside his chest flared like a spark 🔥.
"YES. YES! I’ll do it!!" Ren shouted without hesitation.
Jun laughed and slapped Ren on the back 👊.
"Alright, tough guy. Come with me."
They walked through the city under the setting sun 🌇 until they reached a shady, beat-down building.
The sign read: Kobushi Boubi (拳防備) — "Fist Defense" 🥊🏯.
Inside, the air smelled like sweat, blood, and old leather.
They met a scary-looking man, Master Fuji — a former fighter whose face looked like it had seen a thousand wars ⚔️.
Fuji eyed Ren suspiciously.
"Jun, I know you're our best fighter 🥇... but why the hell are you bringing me this weakling?"
Jun smiled, smoke from his cigarette curling lazily in the air 🚬.
"Old man, he’s got potential. I can feel it."
Fuji grunted.
"Tch. Fine. Let’s see if he can even punch a tree hard enough to knock down a leaf 🍂."
They dragged Ren outside to the practice yard.
"Punch that tree," Jun ordered, pointing.
Ren nodded and threw a wild punch.
Nothing.
He punched again.
Nothing.
Again.
Nothing but bruised knuckles and stinging pain 😣.
Hours passed.
The sun sank, and darkness swallowed the sky 🌑.
Streetlights buzzed to life.
Ren kept punching — his fists bleeding, his body screaming to stop 🩸.
Finally, at 10 PM, a single, small leaf fluttered down 🍂.
Ren collapsed to the floor, exhausted and crying silent tears.
"Arigato... sir..." he whispered between gasps 🥲.
Jun leaned against the wall, cigarette glowing in the dark 🚬.
"See, old man..." he said, a lazy smirk on his lips. "I told you.
This kid’s got it." 😎
🌸🔥 To be continued...
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