ok the story was solid but it would be much better if u make it a little more specific like how did the demon disappears or like where did he/she got hurt like the parts of the body example: Dale: (got hitten by arrow on the elbow) I can't -i can't die like this (by his determination a hidden power was unlocked) rahh-----
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ok the story was solid but it would be much better if u make it a little more specific like how did the demon disappears or like where did he/she got hurt like the parts of the body
example:
Dale: (got hitten by arrow on the elbow)
I can't -i can't die like this
(by his determination a hidden power was unlocked)
rahh-----
2025-04-21
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