Author, and this is just my HUMBLE OPINION, but can you focus on the main couple for a bit. It feels like the story is getting sidetracked a lot since the 'jumping from the building' incident. There are a lot of side characters and it's getting harder to keep track of every single one of them. If you already have plans for the story then please just keep doing what you're doing but if you don't then would consider what I said. And I ❤️ your story, it's really good /Smile/
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Cleo
Author, and this is just my HUMBLE OPINION, but can you focus on the main couple for a bit. It feels like the story is getting sidetracked a lot since the 'jumping from the building' incident. There are a lot of side characters and it's getting harder to keep track of every single one of them.
If you already have plans for the story then please just keep doing what you're doing but if you don't then would consider what I said.
And I ❤️ your story, it's really good /Smile/
2025-05-30
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☆BLover💖💛💙☆
Damn bro, why you gotta come for the shorties🥲
2025-05-30
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UNKNOWN PERSON
My heart is at peace /Drool/
2025-05-30
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