Author, the dialogues are so repetitive. She trying to run away, saying she can't be owned, he is responding 'your mine' and Lorenzo every time coming in between. It feels I'm reading the same chapter again and again. Hope this is improved or I may have to drop it
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Angie
Author, the dialogues are so repetitive. She trying to run away, saying she can't be owned, he is responding 'your mine' and Lorenzo every time coming in between. It feels I'm reading the same chapter again and again. Hope this is improved or I may have to drop it
2025-03-07
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