This is my first chat story. Hope everyone likes it
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Isabella Farren/Izzy/FL
Name : Isabella Farren
Age : 29
Profession : Nurse
Character : Thoughtful, Practical, funny, charming
Secret : has a secret crush on someone since highschool
Story Begins🥳
Isabella sits in a sage-green office, the quiet hum of fluorescent lights above her only amplifying the tension in the room. She fidgets with her hands, her palms clammy as she waits.
**** - inner thoughts
( ) - actions
Isabella Farren/Izzy/FL
**Five years. Five years of saving, planning, sacrificing... and now it's all on the line**
The "Top Mortgage Broker of the Year" award on the wall does little to ease her anxiety. Her mind races with worst-case scenarios.
**What if there's something wrong with my credit? what if the sellers backed out? Or worse-what if I missed something?**
She glances at the clock. The minutes seem to stretch longer as she waits for Ross, her broker, to return with an update
Isabella Farren/Izzy/FL
**This is it. My dream of owning a home is so close... but it feels like it's slipping away. What if I'm not ready for this?**
The door opens, and Ross enters, his expression unreadable.
Ross/Mortage broker
(Calmly) Isabella, everything looks good on your end. But we've hit a small issue.
Isabella's stomach drops. She leans forward, bracing for the worst.
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