It's been a very long time since you last updated, don't you think that you should update now, and I really care about the sentences, please atleast try to improve it, there are so many apps to translate if it's hard for to write in english. I'm not trying to insult you or anything, after all it's just a language but please atleast try to improve it. You have really good story build up, like the background of the story or theme, I really like them but there are some aspects you should look into, like in-depth character development, their background, history, and most importantly how this world works, I know it's a ABO world with Enigma in it but you the authy and everyone write it with minor changes, you should explain those things clearly. listen, you got a idea when you were writing those story but maybe you half-assed it till now. You got good head on your shoulder, I hope you use it properly. and please update
2025-06-03
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❣️나비(PR3ÇÎÕÛS#P3ÃRL(◕ᴗ◕✿
when I read it I thought it was a complete story but 😭 it's just the starting part actually I didn't see it's chapter I just read it bec it was good..... author how many chapters are there please update soon
2025-05-15
1
Belle
Plot of story is okay but you need to improve your sentences author it’s very hard to read with the many grammatical mistakes 🙏
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暗いTsukiyo
It's been a very long time since you last updated, don't you think that you should update now, and I really care about the sentences, please atleast try to improve it, there are so many apps to translate if it's hard for to write in english. I'm not trying to insult you or anything, after all it's just a language but please atleast try to improve it. You have really good story build up, like the background of the story or theme, I really like them but there are some aspects you should look into, like in-depth character development, their background, history, and most importantly how this world works, I know it's a ABO world with Enigma in it but you the authy and everyone write it with minor changes, you should explain those things clearly. listen, you got a idea when you were writing those story but maybe you half-assed it till now. You got good head on your shoulder, I hope you use it properly. and please update
2025-06-03
0
❣️나비(PR3ÇÎÕÛS#P3ÃRL(◕ᴗ◕✿
when I read it I thought it was a complete story but 😭 it's just the starting part actually I didn't see it's chapter I just read it bec it was good..... author how many chapters are there please update soon
2025-05-15
1
Belle
Plot of story is okay but you need to improve your sentences author it’s very hard to read with the many grammatical mistakes 🙏
2025-05-18
0