One of the good fan fictions, good job 👍. Didn't like that sub-characters were introduced in the beginning where it was not even needed. There is too much jumping to conclusions without a clear explanation. Explanation for Minha calling Tae "eomma" came very untimely. Some other things like proof reading the chapters, etc. need to be done too.
2022-05-05
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min nina•_•
authorshii thank you for the story I finish it in one day only😂😂
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Moonlight
One of the good fan fictions, good job 👍. Didn't like that sub-characters were introduced in the beginning where it was not even needed.
There is too much jumping to conclusions without a clear explanation.
Explanation for Minha calling Tae "eomma" came very untimely.
Some other things like proof reading the chapters, etc. need to be done too.
2022-05-05
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min nina•_•
authorshii thank you for the story I finish it in one day only😂😂
2021-06-16
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riva
superb chat story bts and stars also
2020-11-25
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