Author a tip of advice ! These kind of thought male it look cringey so u should use third person pov to tell what she feel and thinks cause then that will even it out and would seem realistic. Nobody will make themselves look bad and evil. ( its just something I’ve seen in other stories I think it will help but its up to u ofc 🫶🏼)
2025-03-19
3
Moonlight
Finally an ounce of humanity in this person 😒 But it's not like he is doing it for Koo. It's all to save face for himself.
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Respected hyung
Author a tip of advice ! These kind of thought male it look cringey so u should use third person pov to tell what she feel and thinks cause then that will even it out and would seem realistic. Nobody will make themselves look bad and evil. ( its just something I’ve seen in other stories I think it will help but its up to u ofc 🫶🏼)
2025-03-19
3
Moonlight
Finally an ounce of humanity in this person 😒 But it's not like he is doing it for Koo. It's all to save face for himself.
2025-03-31
14
Yoonha
woowwww broo 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
2025-04-07
5