ur story is good but u made tae's character so weak like easily forgivable and I didn't even got in which time he got reborn I had to read 3-4 times to understand the phrase u need to improve a little bit u can't justify their rudeness and hate by a sorry word u have to gain it and if u can't then forget about getting forgiveness
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Anjali Bisht
ur story is good but u made tae's character so weak like easily forgivable and I didn't even got in which time he got reborn I had to read 3-4 times to understand the phrase u need to improve a little bit u can't justify their rudeness and hate by a sorry word u have to gain it and if u can't then forget about getting forgiveness
2025-07-25
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PJ1317
upload in three days Author /Angry/
2025-01-25
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ah- sry.. wrong...🌚room
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2025-01-29
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