i really enjoyed the start of your story author! however, i noticed that 'her' and 'she' were used for a male character. It might be more accurate to use 'his,' 'he,' and 'him' instead☺️✌🏻
2024-07-22
6
Maira_ThePuppetWolf
The anticipation is killing me, update the next chapter already!
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Chimchim Flower
i really enjoyed the start of your story author! however, i noticed that 'her' and 'she' were used for a male character. It might be more accurate to use 'his,' 'he,' and 'him' instead☺️✌🏻
2024-07-22
6
Maira_ThePuppetWolf
The anticipation is killing me, update the next chapter already!
2024-07-15
1