I think the author is typing this to make it as if you are in that position of her, so you can feel about the emotions and so on
2024-10-26
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unicorn
what is this sentence forming yarr it has to be like this Michele looked at her and can see tear bla bla...
2024-06-26
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livinglife
hi author, I will be honest with you ..you started a story with a good plot...but using "you" in each instead of her / she / I making it confusing...I hope you understand. thanku for upcoming with a new idea..all the best upto the end./Smile/
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PRASHEETHA RAMACHANDRAN
I think the author is typing this to make it as if you are in that position of her, so you can feel about the emotions and so on
2024-10-26
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unicorn
what is this sentence forming yarr it has to be like this Michele looked at her and can see tear bla bla...
2024-06-26
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livinglife
hi author,
I will be honest with you ..you started a story with a good plot...but using "you" in each instead of her / she / I making it confusing...I hope you understand.
thanku for upcoming with a new idea..all the best upto the end./Smile/
2024-06-12
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