see your story is good but you know what in s story character development happens slowly not like in a day, if she becomes everyone's favorite and strong in a day then the story will become boring, try to you know make the story in steps, not everything happens together.
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startled*
2024-10-26
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~𝕮𝖍𝖑𝖔𝖊~
see your story is good but you know what in s story character development happens slowly not like in a day, if she becomes everyone's favorite and strong in a day then the story will become boring, try to you know make the story in steps, not everything happens together.
2024-10-03
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