[He gave me the whip and kneel down facing back on me after taking off his shirt. This is going to be very painful, This whip has several little blades on it.]
Okay, Let me be honest. I think this story has the best Storyline I have ever read from kris's stories. The plot set up was amazing, how even till the end, we were confused about the ML and FL. lol. Plus, it rarely had a boring chapter and it made me crave for it more. Though, if this is the ending of the forgiveness, I think you rushed a bit. I would love it if he had at least grovel a bit. it seems as if he took the shortcuts. Moreover, I think gene didn't grow much as a character after getting her heartbreak. She remains the same which was disappointing character wise. I wish she would have left him and he would have followed her just like Alex Volkov did. And then this episode happens where she finally gains trust in him.
2024-05-12
38
Piyushi Roy
yeah, while everyone is feeling bad for him, I am feeling bad for her/Brokenheart/
2024-05-12
13
Daimira
i literally am in love with the author for giving out one of the best stories. I've read many revenge stories, but this one had the most interesting storyline. the direction was perfect. the story was written in such a way that the reader feels every emotion, amazing writing. This wud be one of my favourites from now on. The author has kept the emotions from all sides as it should be and has written a masterpiece. The sarcasm and entertainment was as good as the whole storyline.
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°★🦋𝐌𝐲𝐬𝐭𝐢𝐜🦋★°
Okay, Let me be honest. I think this story has the best Storyline I have ever read from kris's stories. The plot set up was amazing, how even till the end, we were confused about the ML and FL. lol. Plus, it rarely had a boring chapter and it made me crave for it more. Though, if this is the ending of the forgiveness, I think you rushed a bit. I would love it if he had at least grovel a bit. it seems as if he took the shortcuts. Moreover, I think gene didn't grow much as a character after getting her heartbreak. She remains the same which was disappointing character wise. I wish she would have left him and he would have followed her just like Alex Volkov did. And then this episode happens where she finally gains trust in him.
2024-05-12
38
Piyushi Roy
yeah, while everyone is feeling bad for him, I am feeling bad for her/Brokenheart/
2024-05-12
13
Daimira
i literally am in love with the author for giving out one of the best stories. I've read many revenge stories, but this one had the most interesting storyline. the direction was perfect. the story was written in such a way that the reader feels every emotion, amazing writing. This wud be one of my favourites from now on. The author has kept the emotions from all sides as it should be and has written a masterpiece. The sarcasm and entertainment was as good as the whole storyline.
2024-05-22
0