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2024-05-21
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Sofia 💗
author update more episodes please fast and don't give pov in Box it's boring to read rather you can give their conversation
2024-05-21
1
Xiao li
here's a suggestion Noor, try to deliver the story by writing it in more dialogues instead of paragraphs, for example, in previous episode, you wrote about Aaron and his sister's scene, but that was in paragraph(bg voice chat), because from my experience I can confirm that readers mostly skip the paragraph part...
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plssssssssssssssssss plssssssssssssssssss plssssssssssssssssss plssssssssssssssssss plssssssssssssssssss update more
2024-05-21
1
Sofia 💗
author update more episodes please fast and don't give pov in Box it's boring to read rather you can give their conversation
2024-05-21
1
Xiao li
here's a suggestion Noor, try to deliver the story by writing it in more dialogues instead of paragraphs, for example, in previous episode, you wrote about Aaron and his sister's scene, but that was in paragraph(bg voice chat),
because from my experience I can confirm that readers mostly skip the paragraph part...
2024-05-21
2