There more than 2 things I’d complain about but some are just my personal preference so 😂 I’m not the author. I know it was dark romance and expected the toxic environment. But here’s my 2 cents: 1. Aaron didn’t suffer enough 🥊 2. Enna’s character wasn’t likable at all 🧙♀️ 3. I couldn’t see the chemistry between Ezra and Mac 😖 4. Kant shot a innocent person but turned around and adopted a disabled person (felt groomy) 😖 5. Where the hell is Macro? 😮 6. Sa didn’t pay for tricking Aaron’s behavior early on 😮 7. I just wanted a suffering and redemption arc for Aaron, he was a strong character regardless. This is opinion, not a critic to your work, The story itself was great! I’ll check the others too. I just really wanted a redemption arc with the same people staying together. But oh well. Thanks for this work ✍️
2024-09-27
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Shan
kant and teen was the best part of this for the rest I just wasted my time
2025-01-05
0
after all this twist and turn... the main couple have the cutest plot 🥹
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There more than 2 things I’d complain about but some are just my personal preference so 😂 I’m not the author. I know it was dark romance and expected the toxic environment. But here’s my 2 cents:
1. Aaron didn’t suffer enough 🥊
2. Enna’s character wasn’t likable at all 🧙♀️
3. I couldn’t see the chemistry between Ezra and Mac 😖
4. Kant shot a innocent person but turned around and adopted a disabled person (felt groomy) 😖
5. Where the hell is Macro? 😮
6. Sa didn’t pay for tricking Aaron’s behavior early on 😮
7. I just wanted a suffering and redemption arc for Aaron, he was a strong character regardless.
This is opinion, not a critic to your work, The story itself was great! I’ll check the others too. I just really wanted a redemption arc with the same people staying together. But oh well. Thanks for this work ✍️
2024-09-27
4
Shan
kant and teen was the best part of this for the rest I just wasted my time
2025-01-05
0
after all this twist and turn... the main couple have the cutest plot 🥹
2024-11-09
0