I think the story is good. But all due respect author, if you could please make things more clear and correct spelling, it would make the whole story infinitely better
I understand if English is not your first language, but if you know it and you are fluent, please try to correct these things.
Even if you don't know English, could you please be more clear with transitions and the characters actions?
THANKS AND SORRY IF THIS IS ANNOYING ✌️😘
2025-05-19
1
Magdalana Schubert
no what they are saying is that they did some stuff gist not untill morning
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Kitty Foreman
I think the story is good. But all due respect author, if you could please make things more clear and correct spelling, it would make the whole story infinitely better
I understand if English is not your first language, but if you know it and you are fluent, please try to correct these things.
Even if you don't know English, could you please be more clear with transitions and the characters actions?
THANKS AND SORRY IF THIS IS ANNOYING
✌️😘
2025-05-19
1
Magdalana Schubert
no what they are saying is that they did some stuff gist not untill morning
2025-06-09
0
Little Tiger
bad timeing
2025-03-25
0