Dude add some more key ideas and themes... you have good story but try to put it in a good way... like the person he would give blood and immediately she gets okay after giving blood prolong it so it will be more interesting to the readers... just a help from my side to improve... hope you don't take it in wrong way..
2024-04-19
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Lady_senpai
You can't leave us hanging like this! Write the next chapter now!
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Fantasy world
Dude add some more key ideas and themes... you have good story but try to put it in a good way... like the person he would give blood and immediately she gets okay after giving blood prolong it so it will be more interesting to the readers... just a help from my side to improve... hope you don't take it in wrong way..
2024-04-19
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Lady_senpai
You can't leave us hanging like this! Write the next chapter now!
2023-11-05
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