Once Upon Time I Was A Princess
Chapter 4
Sabrina : Young FL
*Fearfully....What's inside that package?
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It's a furious young creature
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A creature can't be taming
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He can destroy the whole world with his power
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But if he grew up & found a kind heart like yours
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a heart never loses his right way nomatter what it faced
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a heart can guide him to the true path
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that furious creature would be the kindest one ever
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giving that girl happiness
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none before her could get
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taking her to his world at the end
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to be its queen wife & rule it with him side by side
Sabrina : Young FL
*Afraid
Sabrina : Young FL
& what if she fail in timing him
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😔He would kill her as soon he shows up
Sabrina : Young FL
*terrified
Sabrina : Young FL
What if I didn't want to take that reward
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*Smiling sadly.....then, it would be your choice
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but you must know that
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Unfortunately, I show up each 100 years a once
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& If you refused to take this package to help that poor creature now
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none other than you would be able to set him free
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& he would die when you reach the age of 18
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In that night of full moon in hunger of love
Sabrina : Young FL
Hunger of love?....*Surprisingly
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😔Yeah, he was born In a world filled of hate & never get love
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& if he grew up & couldn't get love, he would die
Sabrina : Young FL
😔So he is just like me!
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& now you have to choose between
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Being selfish & save yourself
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& being selfless taking the risk to save him & you may lose your life for
Sabrina : Young FL
*feeling pity for him, but afraid & confused
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There is an old man is gonna die out there
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If you didn't give him your help now
Sabrina : Young FL
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Comments
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Can Sabrina make a right decision
It must be hard since she's still a child
2025-05-30
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Umimop
So I was right, the gift has to do everything with ML. When Sabrina said: “He’s just like me”, to be honest my breath hitched for a second there.
And the next moment, when granny reminded her the old man is dying nearby, I laughed out loud, because that’s exactly what I’ve been thinking.
As a writer, I’m always anoxious about the pace, especialy, if several things happen simulat… in my story. I would constantly go back and check the text like a maniac, to see, if the things are happening too slow or too fast, and how do they correlate with one another. and this habit seeps into my reading as well.
So I was constantly thinking at the back of my head: «What about that grandpa? Is he holding up?»
And then you actually went and made the characters to notice the same thing in a such hilarious way, I just can’t! Loved this moment!
2024-02-18
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❀𝓗𝓪𝔃𝔂 𝓓𝓻𝓮𝓪𝓶𝓮𝓻❀
Umm..... 🤔 Beauty and the Beast????/Doge/
2023-09-29
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