I'm greatly disappointed with this story no progress in their life no charector development no victory no love no happiness nothing all day long FL blames ML , be maybe bad in their past life but blaming someone without any proof just based on their past actions is horrible. he was bad but for now he is innocent,FL is continuously blaming ML , as how he blamed her in her last life.What is the difference between them both are bad in each other life just in different life's I feel like I just wasted all my time on a useless story. like you won't pay any tax to make some development,do you? then just make some progress in their character and the plot. it's just getting annoying and annoying as the story goes 😞😞😞😞
2025-02-18
25
Taejun
I'm leaving this story for good. The plot is one of the most common ones. What makes every story different is how they portray the afterlife/reborn life. You failed at creating a decent plot. You can't even write about one couple properly, why did you choose to write about three more?? If you are a busy person, make it short and simple otherwise leave. What's the need to drag a boring story for two years none of us readers understand. Anyways, goodbye. I hope you either finish this bullshit story or leave writing.
2025-02-18
2
i thought some miracle will happen, her parents didn't dead but at this point everything is vain, she's really üseless now nothing good happened, i hãte to see these three, feel like dropping this too but I like this kind of plot but now I really feel nothing about this story but still I will wait 2 more chapters if nothing happened then it's better to leave thanks ❤️❤️
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I'm greatly disappointed with this story
no progress in their life
no charector development
no victory
no love
no happiness
nothing all day long FL blames ML , be maybe bad in their past life but blaming someone without any proof just based on their past actions is horrible. he was bad but for now he is innocent,FL is continuously blaming ML , as how he blamed her in her last life.What is the difference between them both are bad in each other life just in different life's
I feel like I just wasted all my time on a useless story. like you won't pay any tax to make some development,do you? then just make some progress in their character and the plot. it's just getting annoying and annoying as the story goes 😞😞😞😞
2025-02-18
25
Taejun
I'm leaving this story for good. The plot is one of the most common ones. What makes every story different is how they portray the afterlife/reborn life. You failed at creating a decent plot.
You can't even write about one couple properly, why did you choose to write about three more??
If you are a busy person, make it short and simple otherwise leave. What's the need to drag a boring story for two years none of us readers understand.
Anyways, goodbye.
I hope you either finish this bullshit story or leave writing.
2025-02-18
2
i thought some miracle will happen, her parents didn't dead but at this point everything is vain, she's really üseless now nothing good happened, i hãte to see these three, feel like dropping this too but I like this kind of plot but now I really feel nothing about this story but still I will wait 2 more chapters if nothing happened then it's better to leave thanks ❤️❤️
2025-02-18
7